#2234
Stefanie DeMaria
Sin Verguenza

    Reading this lit. me. up.
    It felt like you were taking me on a journey with the way you wove in quotes, anecdotes, poems as you pondered the sin vergüenza title. I love how free and unfiltered it felt while also hitting home at the same time. Similar to what G said, I would love see more detail so I can see and feel more of the moments you share. I also wanted to say that your style is inspiring me to experiment with a stream of consciousness style that this flash write reminds me of. Sometimes its easy to think rigidly about we want our writing to look like, and your writing reminded me to unclench a little more next time I write. Thanks for that. I can’t wait to see what else you write over the next few weeks.