[Maria J. Matta-Ortiz]

Jennifer! You took us on a journey because you were on a journey grappling with sin verguenzaness. I really loved this line “While the vergüenza has a highlight reel at the ready, the “sin” has a constellation of word, song, and memory inspiring and reminding me that the more I feel, the more I feel.” I very much relate to this, and the idea of being an aspiring sin verguenza. I appreciated how you wove in the different quotes, and would love to see you go more in-depth to bring them into the story/writing.