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to my bisabuela
Amar, did you revise this version? I re-read the first one and they’re pretty much identical. I think you could have expanded on this work with what we wrote in class last week and from the comments I shared on the first draft. I appreciate your work overall and still think this is a very thoughtful and solid letter.