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Thank you for reading. This builds upon my submission from the Week 2 quick write
Stefanie, this is so beautiful and comforting. I loved the use of “past selves” and pots that retain a memory. And so many precious lines. I’d love maybe one sentence or clause clearly stating the relationship between the writer and the receiver. I read this in an agitated mood, and felt better by the time I got to the end.
Stefanie, I love this piece, it felt like a warm hug. I can feel the warmest, sweetness, and softness of the avena intertwined with the story. I especially loved this line and sentiment throughout “The sugar is the vessel, but the memory is what actually sweetens the avena.” The story was the vessel, but the details are what sweetened and warmed the feeling behind it. Great job.