[Robin Nixon]

Thanks. Not sure if I am doing this right but here goes. 🙂

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[Gabby Rivera]

Robin, this is such a fun piece. Love how dedicated Dawn is to her wife and baby. Her protector energy is rooted in absolute love & devotion. That was great. Excited to see more of it, especially in the moments where Dawn gets vulnerable in her thoughts. One thing, you open with the Abuelita being the root to sin vergüenza for Dawn but then she’s meeting her Tia. Maybe choose one and move her from start to finish, maybe she even joins them at the restaurant just in time to see Dawn in action. Either way, thank you for this.

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