Attached 🙂
Julián, this piece is everything it needs to be. It’s a reflection on grief, chosen family, and breaking bread in community. Loved this line: The kind of recipes that have no actual measurements but require you to consider what is a pinch in terms of the size of your relative’s hands.
Here are some elevation notes if you choose to expand the piece:
Go into greater and more specific/emotional detail in your cooking instructions. What does warmth feel like? What makes a home a warm place? Who are the chose family members and why did you choose them? There’s room to expand and make this piece more specific to you and the family of your dreams.
In the first section, give us insight into why you’re begging for sanctuary. Give more specific details to what that sanctuary looks and feels like. Use colors, name names, envision it and share that on the page.
