[belovedl3sbian]

Here’s my submission!

[belovedl3sbian]

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[Gabby Rivera]

Nyx, like I said in class, you have the gift. Your writing voice is deeply authentic and full of power. Lines like this are a testament to that power: She had sweat that rolled off her face and hands, like wisdom expelling from the body. That is an incredible line. Fill everything you write with lines like that wherever you can. The choices you make with details are exquisite. For example: To satisfy her hunger, I offer her the tenderness of collard greens with Louisiana hot sauce. Using the word ‘tenderness’ here fills the line with love and once again showcases your connection with the writing spirit. Love this prayer and recipe. Thank you for sharing your work.

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