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      hausofamar
      Sin Verguenza

        A Letter to Mi Bisabuela Quick Write Week 1 attached.

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        Gabby Rivera
        Instructor

          Amar, what a thoughtful and sincere letter. I’m so proud of you. Thank you for being so vulnerable on the page. This is a strong blueprint for the next version of your letter, seriously. Every line points to something real. Let’s hone in on that. Loved this: I was infatuated with pop stars and movies, so
          convinced that I was meant to be just like them. I expressed myself loudly with my music taste. I ordered dessert with any meal.
          Now let’s taste that dessert. Let’s see what scene in your favorite movie absolutely guts you. And it’s not about flooding the page with specific details about random things, it’s about using those details to truly showcase your voice & your life/who you are. You’ve got this.

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